Have you watched any sports live at a sports ground or stadium? How was the experience? Was it bette

2023-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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Unfortunately, I have never watched sports live in a sports ground or stadium. I had several opportunities to go see the games held in Korea, but I couldn\'t go because the situation wasn\'t right. According to people who watched the game in person, it was a much more lively and thrilling feeling. However, next year, there will be a national sports competition in Gimhae, the city where I live. Since it\'s where I live, I think it\'ll be close, so I\'m going to visit to watch the game. If I see the game, I will share my experience with you then.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I see. So do I. We share the same experience with regards to watching sports live in a stadium. It\'s never the right time. Still, it\'s wonderful to hear that you have a national sports competition to look forward to next year. It sounds like an exciting plan, and I hope you\'ll enjoy the experience. When you do attend the game, I look forward to hearing all about it!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Have you watched any sports live at a sports ground or stadium? How was the experience? Was it better than watching on TV?
Unfortunately, I have never watched sports live in a sports ground or stadium.
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I had several opportunities to go see the games held in Korea, but I couldn\'t go because the situation wasn\'t right.
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According to people who watched the game in person, it was a much more lively and thrilling feeling.
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However, next year, there will be a national sports competition in Gimhae, the city where I live.
>> Correct
Since it\'s where I live, I think it\'ll be close, so I\'m going to visit to watch the game.
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If I see the game, I will share my experience with you then.
>> Correct

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