Have you watched any sports live at a sports ground or stadium? How was the experience? Was it bette
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II\'ve been to the field, but I haven\'t been to the groud. I think Playing in the playground was more fun than TV.
I go to ground because I was able can see soccer players.
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Here\'s your corrected essay for you, Yale. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Good evening!
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Have you watched any sports live at a sports ground or stadium? How was the experience? Was it better than watching on TV? If not, would you want to go and watch there? Why?
I\'ve been to the field, but I haven\'t been to the ground.
>> OR: I\'ve watched a game at a sports field, but not at a stadium.
I think Playing in the playground was more fun than TV.
>> I think watching at a sports stadium was more fun than on TV.
I go to ground because I was able can see soccer players.
>> It\'s more fun because I can see the soccer players in person.
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