Having a child is.
학생이 쓴 원문
Having children changes someone\'s life 180 degrees. Because once there is a change in the body, the cost increases, and above all, there is one more life that can love each other. I think it\'s better to get older and have children. Because having a child at a very young age can be financially insufficient. When you\'re ready, give birth.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Having children changes someone\'s life 180 degrees.
>>> CORRECT!
Because once there is a change in the body, the cost increases, and above all, there is one more life that can love each other.
>>> CORRECT!
I think it\'s better to get older and have children.
>>> CORRECT!
Because having a child at a very young age can be financially insufficient.
>>> CORRECT!
When you\'re ready, give birth.
>>> CORRECT!
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