Having a goal in life is useful to success.

2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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We live in each ways our life. There are various ways to manage a life on everyone. We must succeed in life if we wish it is prospective. I don't know what the life is really are. There are too many people in world,America, Asia, and so on. We live each lives as one who received as it is. Thanks for reading. I am too confused to think about the goal of life.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a wonderful night.

Talk to you tomorrow ☺


We live in each ways our life.
>> We live our lives in different ways.


There are various ways to manage a life on everyone.
>> There are various ways to manage life.


We must succeed in life if we wish it is prospective.
>> We must succeed in life.


I don\'t know what the life is really are.
>> I don\'t know what life really is.


There are too many people in world,America, Asia, and so on.
>> There are too many people in the world.


We live each lives as one who received as it is.
>> We just live our lives as it is.


Thanks for reading.
>> CORRECT


I am too confused to think about the goal of life.

>> I get too confused in thinking about my goal in life.

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