Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job? Do you agree?
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Absolutely not, I strongly against that. I personally think it\'s different what\'s the major or how much you put effort to something. And I don\'t think that\'s the end of a good university.
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Fabulous Thursday to you, Elic! Never give up trying. If you make mistakes, it’s okay because we all do. Making mistakes is a great way to learn.
Absolutely not, I strongly against that.
>>> Absolutely not; I am strongly against that.
I personally think it\'s different what\'s the major or how much you put effort to something.
>>> I personally think it\'s different what the major is or how much effort you put into something.
And I don\'t think that\'s the end of a good university.
>>> CORRECT.
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