Having a perfect memory
학생이 쓴 원문
There has been pros and cons about having a perfect memory. Some people think that it has more advantages.For example, with perfect memory, we can always have good grades on exams which bring about going to dream university and getting a promising job. However, in my opinion having a perfect memory makes us unhappy and depressed. Bag things sometimes happen during our life. Our brain makes the bad memory gradually forgotten. But with perfect memory, we have to live along with things that we don’t want to know. Therefore, I think acquiring perfect memory is not beneficial to humans.
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There has been pros and cons about having a perfect memory.
>>> There have been pros and cons about having a perfect memory.
Some people think that it has more advantages.
>>> CORRECT =)
For example, with perfect memory, we can always have good grades on exams which bring about going to dream university and getting a promising job.
>>> For example, with perfect memory, we can always have good grades in exams which bring about going to our dream universities and getting a promising job.
However, in my opinion having a perfect memory makes us unhappy and depressed.
>>> However, in my opinion, having a perfect memory makes us unhappy and depressed.
Bag things sometimes happen during our life.
>>> Bad things sometimes happen during our life.
Our brain makes the bad memory gradually forgotten.
>>> Our brain gradually forgets the bad memory.
But with perfect memory, we have to live along with things that we don’t want to know.
>>> But with perfect memory, we have to live with things that we don’t want to remember.
Therefore, I think acquiring perfect memory is not beneficial to humans.
>>> CORRECT =)
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