Having a strong will
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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As I invest money to stock market, I often think that I\'ve missed a lot of chances to produce profits.
>>As I invest in the stock market, I often reflect on missed opportunities to generate profits.
Taking a big chance needs to a certain amount of persistance and so stressful that I could not execute big investment.
>>Taking significant chances requires a certain amount of persistence and can be so stressful that I find it challenging to execute big investments.
Therefore I keep the safety invest type, that means I just watch other\'s huge achivement.
>>Therefore, I tend to opt for safer investment types, merely observing others\' substantial achievements.
From these experiences, I got the lesson that if I have a sure belief to certain company, then I should bet for future value without any hesistance.
>>From these experiences, I\'ve learned that if I have a strong belief in a particular company, I should bet on its future value without hesitation.
But, It needs to exact company analysis at the same time and It is always not easy to me.
>>However, precise company analysis is needed, which is not always easy for me.
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