Having a strong will

2023-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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As I invest money to stock market, I often think that I\'ve missed a lot of chances to produce profits. Taking a big chance needs to a certain amount of persistance and so stressful that I could not execute big investment. Therefore I keep the safety invest type, that means I just watch other\'s huge achivement. From these experiences, I got the lesson that if I have a sure belief to certain company, then I should bet for future value without any hesistance. But, It needs to exact company analysis at the same time and It is always not easy to me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Yu [이름]!

Keep up the great work!

-Hanna ^^

As I invest money to stock market, I often think that I\'ve missed a lot of chances to produce profits.

>>As I invest in the stock market, I often reflect on missed opportunities to generate profits.
Taking a big chance needs to a certain amount of persistance and so stressful that I could not execute big investment.

>>Taking significant chances requires a certain amount of persistence and can be so stressful that I find it challenging to execute big investments. 
Therefore I keep the safety invest type, that means I just watch other\'s huge achivement.

>>Therefore, I tend to opt for safer investment types, merely observing others\' substantial achievements.
From these experiences, I got the lesson that if I have a sure belief to certain company, then I should bet for future value without any hesistance.

>>From these experiences, I\'ve learned that if I have a strong belief in a particular company, I should bet on its future value without hesitation. 
But, It needs to exact company analysis at the same time and It is always not easy to me.

>>However, precise company analysis is needed, which is not always easy for me. 

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