Having goals = Power of Practice
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the goal of something is the power of practice.
Also, it is a force that can be overcome in difficult situations.
so, It is very important to have a goal that suggests the direction of life.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this King. A goal does serve as a director and a motivator in life.
- T. Beth
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I think the goal of something is the power of practice.>>> OR: I think the goal of something is to have the power to put it into action.
Also, it is a force that can be overcome in difficult situations.
>>> correct
so, It is very important to have a goal that suggests the direction of life.
>>> correct (So, it is very important to have a goal that suggests the direction of life.)
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