Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Di
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Both views are depending on the situation and values that people have.
First of all, those who choose the view that having more money and less free time is much better are focusing on the wealthy lives.
They prefer to go shopping to buy fancy things and enjoy their life with traveling abroad without thinking about the income.
On the other hand, people who want to have a lot of free time rather than money are concentrating on their own time after working.
Although they are not having much more money, they can have stable salary and enough free time that makes them precious experience everytime.
I have seen someone to go travel overseas freely with family on leave.
It’s hard to get along well with the family after working these days.
but if you have a free time you can hang out with your friends and even family often.
I have been also thinking that having my own time is way much important thing than money so I chose that to my first value when I got my job.
Time waits for no one. I can make and save money whenever I want if I have just enough my free time to enjoy everything.
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>>Correct.
>>Both views depends on the situation and values that people have.
First of all, those who choose the view that having more money and less free time is much better are focusing on the wealthy lives.
>>First of all, people who choose the view of having more money and less free time is much better who focusing on their wealth.
They prefer to go shopping to buy fancy things and enjoy their life with traveling abroad without thinking about the income.
>>They prefer to go shopping and buy some fancy things and enjoy their life travelling abroad without thinking about their income.
On the other hand, people who want to have a lot of free time rather than money are concentrating on their own time after working.
>>On the other hand, people who want to have a lot of free time rather than money are concentrating on their own time after work.
Although they are not having much more money, they can have stable salary and enough free time that makes them precious experience everytime.
>>Although they are not having much money, they can have stable salary and enough free time that makes them precious experience every time.
I have seen someone to go travel overseas freely with family on leave.
>>Correct.
First of all, those who choose the view that having more money and less free time is much better are focusing on the wealthy lives.
>>First of all, people who choose the view of having more money and less free time is much better who focusing on their wealth.
They prefer to go shopping to buy fancy things and enjoy their life with traveling abroad without thinking about the income.
>>They prefer to go shopping and buy some fancy things and enjoy their life travelling abroad without thinking about their income.
On the other hand, people who want to have a lot of free time rather than money are concentrating on their own time after working.
>>On the other hand, people who want to have a lot of free time rather than money are concentrating on their own time after work.
Although they are not having much more money, they can have stable salary and enough free time that makes them precious experience everytime.
>>Although they are not having much money, they can have stable salary and enough free time that makes them precious experience every time.
I have seen someone to go travel overseas freely with family on leave.
>>Correct.
>>OR: I\'ve seen someone to go travel overseas freely with their family during their leave.
It’s hard to get along well with the family after working these days.
>>Correct.
>>OR: It\'s hard to hang out with family after shift these days.
but if you have a free time you can hang out with your friends and even family often.
>>Correct.
I have been also thinking that having my own time is way much important thing than money so I chose that to my first value when I got my job.
>>Correct.
It’s hard to get along well with the family after working these days.
>>Correct.
>>OR: It\'s hard to hang out with family after shift these days.
but if you have a free time you can hang out with your friends and even family often.
>>Correct.
I have been also thinking that having my own time is way much important thing than money so I chose that to my first value when I got my job.
>>Correct.
>>OR: I\'ve been thinking that having my own time is way much important thing than money, So I chose that option when I got my job.
Time waits for no one. I can make and save money whenever I want if I have just enough my free time to enjoy everything.
Time waits for no one. I can make and save money whenever I want if I have just enough my free time to enjoy everything.
>>Correct.
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