Having pets
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Some young couples choose to have pets rather than their children. They are afraid that they have responsibility for raising their children in many ways including financial issues. Especially the high cost of education discourages young couples from having their children.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree! Nowadays, the cost of raising children, including education expenses, can indeed be a significant concern for many individuals and families. Most people feel overwhelmed by the responsibilities associated with parenting, leading them to decide not to have kids at all.
-T. Caitlyn
Some young couples choose to have pets rather than their children.
>> CORRECT
They are afraid that they have responsibility for raising their children in many ways including financial issues.
>> They are afraid of the responsibility that comes with raising children, including various aspects such as financial issues.
Especially the high cost of education discourages young couples from having their children.
>> Specifically, the high cost of education discourages young couples from having children.
>> Specifically, the high cost of education discourages young couples from having children.
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