Hawaii

2018-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I went to Hawaii for 2weeks for training & traveling. It was very hard for me to train at Engineering class. Because I took a test and also did the English presentation. But after training, I traveled various place in Hawaii. Hawaii made a good impression on me. I can't never forget to spend time in Hawaill.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Daniel! ^-^

Happy Tuesday and welcome back! Thank you for this composition.

I also dream of going to Hawaii. I can only imagine how much you enjoyed your trip there. See you then!^^ Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)


I went to Hawaii for 2weeks for training & traveling.

>>> CORRECT!
It was very hard for me to train at Engineering class.

>>> It was very hard for me to train in the Engineering class.
Because I took a test and also did the English presentation.

>>> It\'s because I took a test and I did/delivered my presentation in English.
But after training, I traveled various place in Hawaii.

>>> After training, I traveled to various places in Hawaii.
Hawaii made a good impression on me.

>>> CORRECT!
I can\'t never forget to spend time in Hawaill.

>>> I can never forget the time I spent in Hawaii.

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