He prayed for a lively life, and he actually lived a lively life
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Good evening Eliot! Wow! I was amazed about your name. What a nice name! Thanks for sharing.:) Keep safe and have a good day ahead!
~T. Annie
My English name is Elliot.
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The name Eliot is the name of a missionary.
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He was martyred shortly after starting his missionary work.
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Many people mourned his death. However, because of that event, the gospel was eventually preached.
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He prayed for a lively life, and he actually lived a lively life.
OR>>He prayed for a vibrant life, and he received it.
I want to live a long and healthy life.
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But I want to live many moments of my life with a life of burning passion.
>>But I want to live many moments of my life with burning passion.
That\'s what I thought when I was in college.
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From then on, my English name was Eliot.
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