health
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HAPPY FRIDAY!
Thank you so much, Mrs. [Name], for answering your homework today.
So in short, because you\'ve spent most of your time being ill it affected your feelings towards your passion, correct?
I hope you still enjoy doing anything you\'re passionate about.
I\'ll keep praying for your safety and your family\'s as well.
God bless!
~Teacher Eve.
it.s not connection directly although this has an effect
>> It\'s not connected directly, although this has an effect.
in my case , I spent most of the time in ill health
>> In my case, I spent most of my time being ill.
so it gave a gloomy also which is disappeared passion
>> So I became gloomy, which died out my passion.
therefore it was cloesly connected
>> Therefore, it was closely connected.
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