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2020-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

it.s not connection directly although this has an effect in my case , I spent most of the time in ill health so it gave a gloomy also which is disappeared passion therefore it was cloesly connected

강사 첨삭

HAPPY FRIDAY!

Thank you so much, Mrs. [Name], for answering your homework today.

So in short, because you\'ve spent most of your time being ill it affected your feelings towards your passion, correct?

I hope you still enjoy doing anything you\'re passionate about.

I\'ll keep praying for your safety and your family\'s as well.

God bless!

~Teacher Eve.

it.s not connection directly although this has an effect 

>> It\'s not connected directly, although this has an effect. 
 in my case , I spent most of the time in ill health

>> In my case, I spent most of my time being ill.
 so it gave a gloomy also which is disappeared passion 

>> So I became gloomy, which died out my passion.
 therefore it was cloesly connected

>> Therefore, it was closely connected.

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