Health is important for us to do useful things.
학생이 쓴 원문
Exhaust fumes are bad for your health.
People do not know the value of health till they lose it.
I guess the most important thing is your health.
Health is the first requisite to success in life.
It is bad for the health to smoke like a chimney.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Good job in doing your homework, It\'s nice to put your thoughts into words. That way, you can practice more on your English skills.
People do not know the value of health till they lose it.
>>>People don\'t know the value of health until they get sick.
I guess the most important thing is your health.
>>>I guess the most important thing is health.
Health is the first requisite to success in life.
>>>Health is the first requisite to a success life.
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