\"Health is Wealth\".

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~Teacher Eve.

Many people recognize the importance of health, and they say \"Health is Wealth.\"

>> Many people recognize the importance of health that is why they say that \"Health is Wealth.\"

It was actually true a few decades ago.

>> Correct!

However, as the medical technology improves, the rich lengthen their life by their money.

>> However, as medical technology improves, the rich lengthen their life by using their money.

It implies that \"Wealth becomes Heatlh.\"

>> It implies that \"Wealth becomes Health\".
 Even though many people now believe we can buy health, but we still emphasize the importance of health.

>>  Even though many people now believes that we can buy health, we still have to emphasize the importance of health.

I think it is related to \"Time.\"

>> Correct!

The rich who are unhealthy invest not only their money but also their time to be healthy.

>> Correct!

It ultimately means that they can\'t enjoy their life wholly.

>> Correct!

They have to go to hospital, or in the worst case they have to stay in bed for a long time.

>> They have to go to hospital, or in the worst case scenario they have to stay in bed for a long time.

This would be prove \"Health is Wealth.\"

>> This would prove that \"Health is Wealth\".
 Wealth is also one of the important elements in our life.

>> Wealth is also one of the important elements of our life.

However, if I have to choose one between health and wealth, I will choose wealth.

>> Correct!

Therefore, I can say not \"Wealth is Health,\" but \"Health is Wealth.\"

>> Therefore, I can say not that \"Wealth is Health,\" but \"Health is Wealth\".