health life
학생이 쓴 원문
The health is most important to living.
Nowadays, people are take care of themselve and they want to more good energy from health.
Cause If we lose our health, there are limits and restrictions what they want to do.
I do not like go to gym but i try to go to gym at least twice a week. cause i do not want be sick.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mari!
Thank you for submitting your composition and for sharing your opinion about health. ^^
Let\'s stay healthy! Take care and see you tomorrow.
~Teacher Gina
The health is most important to living.
>> Health is the most important thing when it comes to living.
>> Or: In life, health is the most important thing.
>> Nowadays, people take care of themselves and they want have more energy for their health.
Cause If we lose our health, there are limits and restrictions what they want to do.
Cause If we lose our health, there are limits and restrictions what they want to do.
>> It is because if we lose our health, there will be limits and restrictions on what we want to do.
I do not like go to gym but i try to go to gym at least twice a week. cause i do not want be sick.
I do not like go to gym but i try to go to gym at least twice a week. cause i do not want be sick.
>> I do not like going to the gym but I still try to go there at least twice a week because I don not want to be sick.
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