healthy diet
학생이 쓴 원문
we have a light breakfast.
for example, sweet potato fruit and coffee.
I usually eat outside lunch with a friend or I eat simply by myself.
I tend to prepare dinner carefully.
I am trying to make using fresh ingredients.
also, balance nutrients too.
but if I think too much , it tastes getting bad
soI decided to eat happily and gratefully without too much consideration.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up. -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT! but make sure to use capital letters at the first letter of your first word.
>> We
for example, sweet potato fruit and coffee.
>> For example, we eat sweet potatoes and coffee for breakfast.
I usually eat outside lunch with a friend or I eat simply by myself.
>> I usually eat out at lunch with a friend or I simply eat by myself.
I tend to prepare dinner carefully.
>> CORRECT
I am trying to make using fresh ingredients. also, balance nutrients too.
>> I am using fresh ingredients packed with nutrients for the food that I prepare.
but if I think too much , it tastes getting bad
>> Sometimes, it tastes bad if I put too much seasoning.
soI decided to eat happily and gratefully without too much consideration.
>> I decided to eat happily and gratefully.
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