Healthy Diet Ways
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Diet is to one of goal acheveing in my life.
- Diet is one of the goals I am achieving in my life.
Some diet professionally say that for diet should be eating control and exercise.
- Some dieticians say that a diet should include eating control and exercise.
That way of diet is simple and help for health.
- That way of eating is simple and helps with health.
Some people who wants to lose weigth easy take prescribe madicine from doctor.
- Some people who want to lose weight easily prescribe medication from their doctor.
Some deit medicine was development for curing depreess originally.
- Some diet medicine was originally developed for curing depression.
But side effect of the medicine have effect suppress people appetite.
- But the side effects of the medicine suppress people\'s appetite.
The madicine has another side effect such as digest problem.
- The medication has another side effect, such as a digestion problem.
Taking a madicine for diet should be careful because you have get desise by trying to lose weight easily.
- Taking a medication for a diet should be taken with caution because you can get a disease by trying to lose weight easily.
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