healthy habit
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that the basics are the most important on the every parts .
Health is not exemption.
Healthy habit make our life healthy.
It is natural that excessive dieting or bad life habits destroy our health
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
\"Health is not an option,\" it should be a priority,\" emphasizes that well-being is a fundamental aspect of life, not a choice that can be deferred, and should receive dedicated focus to improve quality of life, boost energy, and reduce stress and illness risk.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
I think that the basics are the most important on the every parts .
>>> I think that the basics are the most important in every part.
Health is not exemption.
>>> Health is not an exception.
>>> Health is not an option.
Healthy habit make our life healthy.
>>> Healthy habits make our lives healthy.
It is natural that excessive dieting or bad life habits destroy our health
>>> Naturally, excessive dieting or bad life habits destroy our health.
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