Heated devate on Pot
학생이 쓴 원문
I can guess there was a legalization of marijuana U.S. state Colorado and Washington five months ago.
So, The heated debate on marijuana in early ages has been started.
In a study published in the New England Journal of Medicine showed that smoking pot from an early age can have lasting impacts on a person’s intelligence.
Simply, Pot can make our kid’s more stupid.
The researchers analyzed date from a vast sample of existing studies on the health effects of marijuana.
And they made a decision that there are enough evidence to believe in a correlation between smoking pot with a critical period for brain development during the ten year.
This result of research is shocking and it is going to cause controversial argument continuously
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Good morning to you!
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So I am going to see you then tomorrow and we will discuss about this article.
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Have nice day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I can guess there was a legalization of marijuana U.S. state Colorado and Washington five months ago.
>> I guess that there was a legalization of marijuana in US in the states of Colorado and Washington five months ago.
So, The heated debate on marijuana in early ages has been started.
>> So, the heated debate on marijuana in early ages has started.
In a study published in the New England Journal of Medicine showed that smoking pot from an early age can have lasting impacts on a person’s intelligence.
>> correct!
Simply, Pot can make our kid’s more stupid.
>> correct!
The researchers analyzed date from a vast sample of existing studies on the health effects of marijuana.
>> The researchers analyzed the date from a vast sample of existing studies on the health effects of marijuana.
And they made a decision that there are enough evidence to believe in a correlation between smoking pot with a critical period for brain development during the ten year.
>> correct!
This result of research is shocking and it is going to cause controversial argument continuously
>> This result of the research is shocking and it is going to cause controversial argument continuously.
Good morning to you!
Thanks for sending your composition.
So I am going to see you then tomorrow and we will discuss about this article.
Thanks a bunch for today!
Have nice day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I can guess there was a legalization of marijuana U.S. state Colorado and Washington five months ago.
>> I guess that there was a legalization of marijuana in US in the states of Colorado and Washington five months ago.
So, The heated debate on marijuana in early ages has been started.
>> So, the heated debate on marijuana in early ages has started.
In a study published in the New England Journal of Medicine showed that smoking pot from an early age can have lasting impacts on a person’s intelligence.
>> correct!
Simply, Pot can make our kid’s more stupid.
>> correct!
The researchers analyzed date from a vast sample of existing studies on the health effects of marijuana.
>> The researchers analyzed the date from a vast sample of existing studies on the health effects of marijuana.
And they made a decision that there are enough evidence to believe in a correlation between smoking pot with a critical period for brain development during the ten year.
>> correct!
This result of research is shocking and it is going to cause controversial argument continuously
>> This result of the research is shocking and it is going to cause controversial argument continuously.
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