Heavy Rain (8/12)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Lara
A typhoon with heavy rain and strong winds passed through the Korean peninsula.
One of our members didn't go to work on last Monday because his flight was canceled because of the strong wind from Jeju Island.
He told us by the phone he couldn't get around the tourist spot.
It rained heavily all day yesterday.
That was a record breaking figure in Korea.
I really like watching the rain.
There are many people suffering from flood in many areas.
I wish the rain would stop.
I will discuss about this.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bobby!! The recent typhoon in Korea was really a surprising moment. I'm aware that there were people who suffered really bad from this event. Let us hope and pray that it wll not happen again. Thank you for sending this topic, we'll talk more about this tomorrow. ^^ Take care.
Hi Lara>> CORRECTA typhoon with heavy rain and strong winds passed through the Korean peninsula.
>> CORRECTOne of our members didn't go to work on last Monday because his flight was canceled because of the strong wind from Jeju Island.
>> One of our members didn't go to work last Monday because his booked flight was cancelled because of the strong wind from Jeju Island.He told us by the phone he couldn't get around the tourist spot.
>> He told us over the phone that he couldn't get around the island's tourist spots.It rained heavily all day yesterday.
>> CORRECTThat was a record breaking figure in Korea.
>> CORRECTI really like watching the rain.
>> CORRECTThere are many people suffering from flood in many areas.
>> CORRECTI wish the rain would stop.>> CORRECTI will discuss about this.
>> I will discuss about this topic tomorrow.
>> I will discuss about this topic in our class tomorrow.See you.
>> CORRECT
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