Helleo

Today's topic is about the minimum wage in Korea Government has made a dicision to raise the minimum wage from 5,580 won to 6,030 won since 2016. I think 6,030 won is still not enough to live well against current price. We can't eat a meal with 6,030 what is earned if we worked for 1 hour. In addition, If we work place far away from home, we should pay some transportation expense about over 4,000 won. When I work in Australia, I had earned ,15,000 won per hour. So I am enough to live and enjoy my life. Anyway, I would like to get a job. not part time job.. P.S Today's topic.. is too difficult to talk about my opinion. T.T

Hello Soo!!!

It is nice to hear from you again.

I am very glad that you continue to try and write articles about your opinion on certain things.

I also congratulate you for trying to improve your skills and I think it will help you in looking for a job that will not only fulfill your needs but a job that you will enjoy.

Earning a minimum wage is really hard most especially with the current state of our economies.

You really have to budget everything.

Regarding the topic for today I still appreciate your effort in trying to voice out what you wanted to say.

Anyways, below are the corrections for this article.

I hope to hear from you soon and have a nice rainy day ahead!!!

Teacher Roxy

xoxoxo

Today\'s topic is about the minimum wage in Korea

>> CORRECT

OR >> My topic for today is about the minimum wage in Korea.

Government has made a dicision to raise the minimum wage from 5,580 won to 6,030 won since 2016.

>> The government has made a decision to raise the minimum wage from 5,580 won to 6,030 won on 2016.

I think 6,030 won is still not enough to live well against current price.  

>> I think that the additional 6,030 won is still not enough to live comfortably because of the current prices with our commodities.

We can\'t eat a meal with 6,030 what is earned if we worked for 1 hour.

>> We can\'t eat a meal for  6,030 won even if we have worked for an hour.

In addition, If we work place far away from home, we should pay some transportation expense about over 4,000 won. 

>> In addition, if we work far away from home we will incur transportation expenses amounting to 4,000 won.
When I work in Australia, I had earned ,15,000 won per hour. So I am enough to live and enjoy my life.

>> When I worked in Australia, I have earned 15,000 won per hour so I live comfortably.

Anyway, I would like to get a job. not part time job..
>> Anyways, I would like to get a full time or permanent job and not a part-time job.

P.S Today\'s topic.. is too difficult to talk about my opinion. T.T

>> P.S. In today\'s topic, I had a hard time expressing my opinion.