Helllo
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Good day to you.^^
First, I have to thank you for sending this in.
I went over it and I can say that you did a pretty fine job!
Have a good time with your friends and thank you so much for your kind words.
I noted everything here, but please remind me in class, just in case I forget about this.^^
You know that many people can be very forgetful nowadays.^^kkk...
If you have some questions, just feel free to raise them in class.
Always take care and I will see you in a while!^^
Hello.
>>Correct!
Thank you for your teaching.
>>Thank you for teaching me.
Usually I do to make sentences not correctly but you are always waiting for me.
>>I don\'t usually make correct sentences but you always wait for me to finish what I have to say.
I will can speak fluently soon.
>>I will speak English fluently soon.^^
I think 10 minutes very short thime but I should study with book.
>>I think 10 minutes is short, so I have to study the lessons in the book.
Today I am planning to meet my friends so I don\'t know when I will come home.
>>Correct
OR >> Today, I am planning to meet my friends, so I don\'t know at what time I will arrive home.
If I am at home when you are calling me, I want to study Toiec speaking.
>>If I am at home during our class, I want to study TOEIC Speaking.
If I am not at home we should free talking.
>>If I am not, we should have free talking.
Have a nice day. Chloe!! See you soon!!
>>Correct!
P.S I am so sorry I forgot that how can I pronunciation your name.
>>P.S. I am sorry because I forgot how to pronounce your name.
>> I am sorry! I forgot the pronunciation of your name.
Please teach me again!!Thank you!!
>>Correct!
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