Helllo Sally~

2012-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi, Good evening! In order to continuously operate air conditioner,I got a cold on the last Summer. I hardly get a cold but if I get a cold, I'll be very sick. Homeworks: 1) Robert made this T-shirt himself. 2) Lisa did the homework herself. 3) We helped ourselves to some cola at the party. 4) Emma, did you take the photo by yourself? 5) I wrote this poem myself. 6) He cut himself with the knife while he was doing the dishes. 7) The lion can defend itself . 8) My mother often talks to herself. 9) Tim and Gerry, if you want more milk, help yourselve. 10) Alice and Doris collected the stickers themselves.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Rooney^^ How are you? Thank you so much for doing your homework^_^You did a very good job.^^I know you are so diligent. Please keep that up.^_^ T. Sally~ Hi, Good evening! >>>CORRECTIn order to continuously operate air conditioner,I got a cold on the last Summer. >>>I caught a cold last Summer because I continuously used the air conditioner. I hardly get a cold but if I get a cold, I\'ll be very sick. >>>CORRECTHomeworks: >>>Homework:(You don\'t say homeworks, you will never add \"s\" to the word homework okay?^_^)1) Robert made this T-shirt himself. >>>CORRECT2) Lisa did the homework herself. >>>CORRECT3) We helped ourselves to some cola at the party. >>>CORRECT4) Emma, did you take the photo by yourself? >>>CORRECT5) I wrote this poem myself. >>>CORRECT6) He cut himself with the knife while he was doing the dishes. >>>CORRECT7) The lion can defend itself . >>>CORRECT8) My mother often talks to herself. >>>CORRECT9) Tim and Gerry, if you want more milk, help yourselve. >>>Tim and Gerry, if you want more milk, help yourselves.10) Alice and Doris collected the stickers themselves. >>>CORRECT

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