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2010-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Anna

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It's a first writing of mine in Power English. I just begin a summer vacation. It's time to study English. In fact, I'm especially weak in English. I need to improve English skills because I live in Korea. If I want to get the job witch I want, I need a good grade of OPIc. What should I do? Thanks you for reading my writing. Have a great day. Well, Who is my teacher?

강사 첨삭

Hi, nice to hear from you. It’s good that you tried sending your composition because this will help you enhance your writing and grammar skill. Just familiarize yourself with easy and common vocabularies then try to construct sentences using those words. Just motivate yourself everyday to study in a very interesting way. By the way, I am your teacher and my name is Abby..^^   It's a first writing of mine in Power English. > This is my first composition to Power English. I just begin a summer vacation. > I just began my summer vacation.It's time to study English. > correct^^In fact, I'm especially weak in English. > Honestly, English is my weakness.I need to improve English skills because I live in Korea. > I need to improve my English skills because I live in Korea.If I want to get the job witch I want, I need a good grade of OPIc. > If I want to get the job that I want, I need to have a good grade in OPIC.What should I do? >Correct^^Thanks you for reading my writing. Have a great day. > Thank you fore reading my writing.Have a great day!Well, who is my teacher? >By the way, who is my teacher?

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