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2012-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

학생이 쓴 원문

hello joan! I think you're my teacher, joan. right? i want to be good at english. but it's not. so i'm so sad. well........ i'll do my best! so i need your help. what i do first? I consider of this program about how I use it. i'm listening english radio! hahaha^^ i'm feel embarrassed a little bit. because this is my first time.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^ Yeah, I\'m your teacher. I sure sense your eagerness to learn English. Since its your first time, I encourage you not to be shy in class. Just go ahead and speak your thoughts. I would be glad to help you whenever. Don\'t worry I would be checking you on your sentences from time to time, okay? You can do it. Just surround yourself with books and learning materials^^ I also advice that you start thinking in English and listening to it and much more, speak out in English..until you dream in English kk..Just kidding! Well until you feel that its into your system already. I\'m here with you! Uh, and if you want try answering the homework I\'m giving you daily ^^ See you in class. Study the following corrections^^ -T\' Joan-   hello joan! >> Hello Joan!I think you\'re my teacher, joan. right? >> I think you\'re my Teacher Joan, right?i want to be good at english.but it\'s not.so i\'m so sad. >>I want to be good in English but I couldn\'t so I\'m so sad.well........ >>Well...i\'ll do my best! >>I\'ll do my best!so i need your help. >> And I need your help.what i do first? >> What shall I do first?I consider of this program about how I use it. >>I considered this programm and I wonder about how should I use it.i\'m listening english radio! >>I\'m listening to the English radio!hahaha^^ i\'m feel embarrassed a little bit.because this is my first time. >>I feel embarrassed a little bit because this is my first time.  

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