Hello^^

2012-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi, teacher! Today, I went to the book store to buy some books of Toefle test and look around some novels. Actually, I really like novels, especially japanese novels, but I don't have time to read those books. This is becuase I have to only focus on my test. ㅠㅠ It makes me feel so sad. haha. After I get perfect score on my toefl exam, I will read those books all day!!!! ps. Thanks for your help!! With your help, my English speaking skills is getting better! I can feel it!^^ 1.orator: she is an outstanding orator. 2.ostentatious: It is a very ostentatious bag. 3.parched : My mouth feel parched. 4.perfidious : Because the guys always made the same mistake, I could be perfidious. 5.pragmatic : Watches are very pragmatic, becase they have useful functions such as stop watch and alarm.

강사 첨삭

Hi! It is pleasing to know that your English is improving! ^^ Thanks fro making your homework as well. Suggestions are provided for improvement. ~Teacher Michelle~ Hi, teacher! >>Correct!Today, I went to the book store to buy some books of Toefle test and look around some novels.>>Today I went to the bookstore to buy some books on TOEFL Test and to look for novels too. Actually, I really like novels, especially japanese novels, but I don\'t have time to read those books. >>Correct! This is becuase I have to only focus on my test. ㅠㅠ >>This is because I have to focus on my upcoming test. It makes me feel so sad. >>Correct! haha. >>Correct!get perfect score on my toefl exam, I will read those books all day!!!! >>If I\'ll be able to get a perfect score on my TOEFL Exam, I will read those books all day!ps!! With your help, my English speaking skills is getting better! >>PS. My English speaking skills is getting better.I can feel it!^^ >>Correct!1.orator: she is an outstanding orator. >>She is an outstanding orator. (careful with your capitalization)2.ostentatious: It is a very ostentatious bag. >>Correct!3.parched : My mouth feel parched. >>My mouth feels parched.4.perfidious : Because the guys always made the same mistake, I could be perfidious. >>Because the guy always makes the same mistake, I feel perfidious about him. 5.pragmatic : Watches are very pragmatic, becase they have useful functions such as stop watch and alarm.  >>Correct!

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