Hello!^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi^^
I'm sorry, I should have checked my homework!!
I promise I will check it everyday after now!! ^^
Anyway, the weather is still great! I'm so happy with this.
Oh! and I remember that you said "Don't ruin your day because of the weather!" When I read this, I thought wow! this is very useful expression! and then I memorized it!! haha
Thank you for teaching me!
I can say you are such a great teacher!
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I agree with the statement.
First of all, sports activities can help students to relieve their stress.
In my case, for example, by playing tennis, I sweat a lot and feel much better.
So, I could forget my worries for a while and refresh my self.
Second, students can more concentrate on their study.
To be specific, if students exercise regulary, they could have healthy body and it would be helpful to students to focus more on their study.
For these reasons, I think the universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Happy Monday! Thank you for sending me your composition.I hope that you will have a great week ahead! Enjoy your week.
Teacher Michelle
Hi^^I\'m sorry, I should have checked my homework!!
>>CorrectI promise I will check it everyday after now!! ^^
>>I promise I will check it everyday from now on.Anyway, the weather is still great! I\'m so happy with this.
>>Anyway, the weather is great and I\'m so happy about this.Oh! and I remember that you said \"Don\'t ruin your day because of the weather!\" When I read this, I thought wow! this is very useful expression! and then I memorized it!! haha
>>Oh! and I remembered that you said \" Don\'t ruin your day because of the weather\". When I come to read this I knew that this expression is very useful. From taht time on I memorized it.Thank you for teaching me!
>>CorrectI can say you are such a great teacher!
>>CorrectI agree with the statement.
>>CorrectFirst of all, sports activities can help students to relieve their stress.
>>First of all, sports activities can help student relieve their stress.In my case, for example, by playing tennis, I sweat a lot and feel much better.
>>In my case, for example by playing tennis I sweat a lot and I feel much better.So, I could forget my worries for a while and refresh my self.
>>CorrectSecond, students can more concentrate on their study.
>>CorrectTo be specific, if students exercise regulary, they could have healthy body and it would be helpful to students to focus more on their study.
>>CorrectFor these reasons, I think the universities should give the same amount of money to their students\' sports activities.
>>For these reasons, I think that the universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities.
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