Hello ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Good morning to you! It was a pleasure meeting you. You don’t have to say sorry if you were not able to introduce yourself properly. I know that you’re nervous and it’s just normal. You have here a very good composition. Most of your sentences are good. Keep on practicing. See you at class.
Lei J
Hi teacher~
>>correct
It was the first class, and I was happy to meet you.
>>It was
our first class together, and
I was happy to meet you.
I did not talk to you about myself. sorry about that.
>>correct
>>I was not
able to introduce myself properly and I apologize for that
I want to speak more to you, but It's hard for me.
>>correct
It is because, when I speak English, my head is complicated.
>>It’s
because whenever I try to speak in English, I mind is getting complicated
However, I try it!.
>>correct
>>however,
I tried my best!!
See you tomorrow.
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