Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Sally.
How are you today?
I prefer the winter to the summer.
Because I feel cold easily, I don't like the winter.
Furthermore, When I was soldier, I cleand up a lot of snow in the winter.
it was a very unfavorable memory to me.
1) He saw his friend going out with Sue.
2) The bus crashed into the blue car driving down the hill.
3) Peter hurt his leg doing karate.
4) The umbrella found at the bus stop belongs to John Smith.
5) The people dancing in the street are all very friendly.
6) I heard my mother talking on the phone.
7) My uncle always has his car washed.
8) We stood waiting for the taxi.
9) Looking down from the tower, we saw many people walking in the streets.
10) The people drove off in a stolen car
강사 첨삭
Hello Rooney^^ I always enjoy talking with you.^_^ I hope you also enjoy our class. Thank you so much for doing your homework^_^ I must say, you did a very good job with your homework^_^ Keep it Rooney^^
T. Sally~
Hello Sally.
>>>CORRECTHow are you today?
>>>CORRECTI prefer the winter to the summer.
>>>I prefer winter than summer.Because I feel cold easily, I don\'t like the winter.
>>>Because I feel cold easily that\'s why I don\'t like winter.Furthermore, When I was soldier, I cleand up a lot of snow in the winter.
>>>Furthermore, when I was a soldier, I cleaned a lot of snow in winter.
>>>Furthermore, when I was doing my military service, I cleaned a lot of snow in winter.it was a very unfavorable memory to me.
>>It was a very unfavorable memory to me.1) He saw his friend going out with Sue.
>>>CORRECT2) The bus crashed into the blue car driving down the hill.
>>>CORRECT3) Peter hurt his leg doing karate.
>>>CORRECT4) The umbrella found at the bus stop belongs to John Smith.
>>>CORRECT5) The people dancing in the street are all very friendly.
>>>CORRECT6) I heard my mother talking on the phone.
>>>CORRECT7) My uncle always has his car washed.
>>>CORRECT8) We stood waiting for the taxi.
>>>CORRECT9) Looking down from the tower, we saw many people walking in the streets.
>>>CORRECT10) The people drove off in a stolen car.
>>>CORRECT
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