Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Sally!
Homework:
Please answer the question in 2 or 3 paragraphs.
here is the question:If you found out that your bestfriend is cheating on his girlfriend, would you tell this to his girlfriend? Why and why not?
Although he is cheating on his girlfriend, I would'nt inform her of this.
Because I don't want that they have a trouble in order to me.
Instead, I will advise him that he should determine whether to quit cheating on his girlfriend or making with his girlfriend.
It is a serious problem. Therefore, he should remind carefully mind of his girlfriend.
강사 첨삭
Hello Rooney^^ T.G.I.F^_^ I am glad you did your homework well.^_^ I am really so proud of you. I will also do the same thing if I encounter that kind of situation.^_^Great job Rooney^^
T. Sally~
Hello Sally!
>>>CORRECTHomework:
>>>CORRECTPlease answer the question in 2 or 3 paragraphs.
>>>CORRECThere is the question:If you found out that your bestfriend is cheating on his girlfriend, would you tell this to his girlfriend? Why and why not?>>>CORRECTAlthough he is cheating on his girlfriend, I would\'nt inform her of this.
>>>Or Although he is cheating on his girlfriend, I would\'nt inform her about this.Because I don\'t want that they have a trouble in order to me.
>>>I don\'t want them to fight because of me.
>>>OR: I don\'t want them to have trouble because of me.Instead, I will advise him that he should determine whether to quit cheating on his girlfriend or making with his girlfriend.
>>>Instead, I will advise him that he should determine whether to quit cheating on his girlfriend or to just break up with his girlfriend.It is a serious problem.
>>>CORRECT
Therefore, he should remind carefully mind of his girlfriend.
>>>Therefore, he should pay attention to his girlfriend.
>>>Therefore, he should take care of his girlfriend(I don\'t know if I got your idea right.^_^)
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