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2012-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Hello Sally! Homework: Please answer the question in 2 or 3 paragraphs. here is the question:If you found out that your bestfriend is cheating on his girlfriend, would you tell this to his girlfriend? Why and why not? Although he is cheating on his girlfriend, I would'nt inform her of this. Because I don't want that they have a trouble in order to me. Instead, I will advise him that he should determine whether to quit cheating on his girlfriend or making with his girlfriend. It is a serious problem. Therefore, he should remind carefully mind of his girlfriend.

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Hello Rooney^^ T.G.I.F^_^ I am glad you did your homework well.^_^ I am really so proud of you. I will also do the same thing if I encounter that kind of situation.^_^Great job Rooney^^ T. Sally~ Hello Sally! >>>CORRECTHomework: >>>CORRECTPlease answer the question in 2 or 3 paragraphs. >>>CORRECThere is the question:If you found out that your bestfriend is cheating on his girlfriend, would you tell this to his girlfriend? Why and why not?>>>CORRECTAlthough he is cheating on his girlfriend, I would\'nt inform her of this. >>>Or Although he is cheating on his girlfriend, I would\'nt inform her about this.Because I don\'t want that they have a trouble in order to me. >>>I don\'t want them to fight because of me. >>>OR: I don\'t want them to have trouble because of me.Instead, I will advise him that he should determine whether to quit cheating on his girlfriend or making with his girlfriend. >>>Instead, I will advise him that he should determine whether to quit cheating on his girlfriend or to just break up with his girlfriend.It is a serious problem. >>>CORRECT Therefore, he should remind carefully mind of his girlfriend. >>>Therefore, he should pay attention to his girlfriend. >>>Therefore, he should take care of his girlfriend(I don\'t know if I got your idea right.^_^)

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