hello!!
학생이 쓴 원문
hello, Eddy
Good Morning.
You Know!, Today is whole meeting day.
I am sorry. I can't have class today. this month, I was abscent many times. really sorry seems to you. but I will do again tomorrow that I will study very hard.
have a good time today.^^;;
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
Thank you for informing me about this matter. I know that you뭨e always busy on Mondays. Just try to do practices and reading activities if you have some spare time. Regarding your composition, I want you to be familiar of the punctuation marks. Be cautious of the sentence patterns and capitalization of words too. Do well in studying and never give up! Enjoy your Monday and see you later!
ABBY
hello, Eddy
>> Hello Abby!Good Morning.
>> Good Morning! You Know!, Today is whole meeting day.
>> You know that today is our meeting in the office.
>> You know that we have a meeting every Monday.
>> You know that we conduct a meeting every Monday in the office.I am sorry. I can't have class today.
>> CORRECT ^^
this month, I was abscent many times. really sorry seems to you. but I will do again tomorrow that I will study very hard.
>> I got so many absences this month and I'm really sorry for that but I will study with you again tomorrow.
>> I've been absent for so many times in your class already and I'm sorry for that but I promise to study hard and have class with you tomorrow.have a good time today.^^;;
>> Have a good day!
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