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2012-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi louise, I arrive in Dajoen now, today I cancel my class, I'm so sorry~ I find out today is our last class, I am so sorry~louise, but after a few days I will extend our class.^^ Recently I'm so busy, hahaha And could you help me request. This is my brother' letter. Brother will mail his coworker in E-mail, But he don't know Eglish well. Me too, hahha After you check this mail, please correction. Thank you louise ^^ his E-mail hello, Brian You. I'm your coworker Yoman. I need to add contents that is a proposition about Veeam B&R. for example, as Veeam Solution's market occupation percentage. Thank you.

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Hi!Thank you so much for sending me a composition. I am happy that you arrived safe in Dajoen.Oh.it\'s okay.I am happy that you will extend your class with me.Thank you so much. I hope that you will have a great day.Take Care!Talk to you again. T.Louise Here are my corrections for you: Hi louise, I arrive in Dajoen now, >>Hi Louise,I am in Dajoen now. OR >>Hi Louise,I already arrived in Dajoen. today I cancel my class, I\'m so sorry~ >>Today,I cancelled the class,I\'m so sorry.I find out today is our last class, I am so sorry~louise, but after a few days I will extend our class.^^ >>I found out that today is our last day.I am so sorry Louise,after a few days I will extend our class. OR >>I found out that today is our last day fo class.I am so sorry Louise,after a few days I will re-enroll again. Recently I\'m so busy, hahaha >>Correct!And could you help me request. >>Could you please help me with my request. This is my brother\' letter. >>This is my brother\'s letter.Brother will mail his coworker in E-mail, >>My brother will send an e-mail to his co-worker. But he don\'t know Eglish well. Me too, hahha >>But he doesn\'t know English that well,me too.After you check this mail, please correction. >>After you check this mail,please give me corrections. Thank you louise ^^>>Thank you Louise.his E-mail >>This is his e-mail.hello, Brian You. >>Hello Brian you.I\'m your coworker Yoman. >>Correct!I need to add contents that is a proposition about Veeam B&R. >>I need to add some contents like a proposition about Veeam B&R.for example, as Veeam Solution\'s market occupation percentage. >>For example,Veeam Solution\'s market occupation percentage.Thank you. >>Correct!

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