hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi louise, I arrive in Dajoen now, today I cancel my class, I'm so sorry~
I find out today is our last class, I am so sorry~louise, but after a few days I will extend our class.^^ Recently I'm so busy, hahaha
And could you help me request. This is my brother' letter.
Brother will mail his coworker in E-mail, But he don't know Eglish well. Me too, hahha
After you check this mail, please correction. Thank you louise ^^
his E-mail
hello, Brian You.
I'm your coworker Yoman.
I need to add contents that is a proposition about Veeam B&R.
for example, as Veeam Solution's market occupation percentage.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi!Thank you so much for sending me a composition. I am happy that you arrived safe in Dajoen.Oh.it\'s okay.I am happy that you will extend your class with me.Thank you so much. I hope that you will have a great day.Take Care!Talk to you again.
T.Louise
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi louise, I arrive in Dajoen now,
>>Hi Louise,I am in Dajoen now.
OR >>Hi Louise,I already arrived in Dajoen.
today I cancel my class, I\'m so sorry~
>>Today,I cancelled the class,I\'m so sorry.I find out today is our last class, I am so sorry~louise, but after a few days I will extend our class.^^
>>I found out that today is our last day.I am so sorry Louise,after a few days I will extend our class.
OR >>I found out that today is our last day fo class.I am so sorry Louise,after a few days I will re-enroll again.
Recently I\'m so busy, hahaha
>>Correct!And could you help me request.
>>Could you please help me with my request.
This is my brother\' letter.
>>This is my brother\'s letter.Brother will mail his coworker in E-mail,
>>My brother will send an e-mail to his co-worker.
But he don\'t know Eglish well. Me too, hahha
>>But he doesn\'t know English that well,me too.After you check this mail, please correction.
>>After you check this mail,please give me corrections.
Thank you louise ^^>>Thank you Louise.his E-mail
>>This is his e-mail.hello, Brian You.
>>Hello Brian you.I\'m your coworker Yoman.
>>Correct!I need to add contents that is a proposition about Veeam B&R.
>>I need to add some contents like a proposition about Veeam B&R.for example, as Veeam Solution\'s market occupation percentage.
>>For example,Veeam Solution\'s market occupation percentage.Thank you.
>>Correct!
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