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Hello Alice, I have an idea about my past homework. However, I made some answers to expected questions in the interview. So, I want you to correct my expressions instead of my homework, if you can.:D Thanks in advance First of all, I am honored to get this opportunity. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is [이름]. You can simply call me [이름]. By the way, my English is not perfect so please bear with me. - To find proper graduate school for me, I searched through many websites and could aware that Duke school of nursing ranked seven. It drew my interest in your nursing school. Also, my uncle who had lived in North Carolina for study long time ago recommended me to apply to your school. - As I said earlier, I want to experience not only getting a Master’s Degree but also working as a nurse practitioner in the U.S. In addition to this, in Korea, there are not many nurse practitioners who completed the NP courses in the U.S. So, I would like to be a front-runner in nursing.

A sweet Wednesday to the beautiful, Summer! Thank you so much for sending this for correction. We are not yet through with our course but I guess you are so ready to face the breathtaking interview! Awesome! I am so impressed with your answers; very confident and promising! I\'m  looking forward to receive more of your answers to interview questions. :) Catch you later, Summer! Have a wonderful day! Enthusiastically, ~Teacher Alice Hello Alice, >> Correct!I have an idea about my past homework. >> Correct! >> OR: I have an idea about my previous homework. >> OR: I have an idea about my last homework. However, I made some answers to expected questions in the interview. >> However, instead of that, I made my answers to some expected questions in the interview.So, I want you to correct my expressions instead of my homework, if you can.:D >> Correct!Thanks in advance>> Thanks in advance. *Don\'t forget you period at the end of the sentence.First of all, I am honored to get this opportunity. >> Correct! >> OR: First of all, I am honored to have this opportunity to be interviewed. Allow me to introduce myself. >> Correct!My name is [이름]. You can simply call me [이름]. >> Correct!By the way, my English is not perfect so please bear with me. >> Correct!To find proper graduate school for me, I searched through many websites and could aware that Duke school of nursing ranked seven. >> To find a proper graduate school for me, I searched through many websites and made me aware that Duke School of Nursing ranked seven. >> OR: To find a decent graduate school for me, I searched through many websites and found out that Duke School of Nursing ranked seven. It drew my interest in your nursing school. >> Correct!  Also, my uncle who had lived in North Carolina for study long time ago recommended me to apply to your school. >> Correct! >> OR: Also, my uncle who had lived in North Carolina for studying years ago recommended me to apply to your school.-As I said earlier, I want to experience not only getting a Master’s Degree but also working as a nurse practitioner in the U.S. >> Correct! >> OR: As I mentioned earlier, I want to experience not only getting a Master\'s Degree but also working as a nurse practitioner in the U.S. In addition to this, in Korea, there are not many nurse practitioners who completed the NP courses in the U.S. >> Correct! >> OR: In addition to this, in Korea, there are few nurse practitioners who completed the NP courses in the U.S. So, I would like to be a front-runner in nursing. >> Correct! *Very good vocabulary!