Hello!! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Alice,
First of all, it is very nice that I can talk with you again. I chose you because you really want to know my situation and I could realize that you tried to help me in many ways. Also, I need to have classes on the evening.
Keeping encourage me to be bold and be confident makes me comfortable. Thank you. ^^
We can talk to each other about other subjects even after the interview. I think that will help me enhance my English speaking skills either.
There are some sentences related to the interview, which need to be corrected.
I think being a nurse practitioner requires more responsiblility. Because a nurse practitioner can order the medicine or a procedure, which is essential to the patient. Therefore, nurse practitioners need to broaden and strengthen their knowledge about their specialties. After all, they will become more competent.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Summer,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate you for re-enrolling under my class.
Well, being a teacher, I should be responsible too. It is always my pleasure to help you, Summer.
Of course, I would be more happy if you\'ll improve your English skills over time.
Let\'s talk more in class.^^
T. Alice
Hello Alice,
>>> CorrectFirst of all, it is very nice that I can talk with you again.
>>> Correct
I chose you because you really want to know my situation and I could realize that you tried to help me in many ways.
>>> I chose you because it seems like you really want to know my situation and I can feel that you try your best to help me in many ways.
Also, I need to have classes on the evening. >>> Also, I need to have classes in the evening.Keeping encourage me to be bold and be confident makes me comfortable.
>>> Encouraging me to be bold and be confident makes me comfortable.
Thank you. ^^>>> CorrectWe can talk to each other about other subjects even after the interview.
>>> Correct
I think that will help me enhance my English speaking skills either. >>> CorrectThere are some sentences related to the interview, which need to be corrected. >>> CorrectI think being a nurse practitioner requires more responsiblilities.
>>> Correct
Because a nurse practitioner can order the medicine or a procedure, which is essential to the patient.
>>> It\'s because a nurse practitioner can order the medicine or a procedure, which is essential to the patient.
Therefore, nurse practitioners need to broaden and strengthen their knowledge about their specialties.
>>> Correct
After all, they will become more competent.
>>> Correct
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