Hello!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Alice, ^^
While wondering this website, I just saw your profile and your video. ^^ It's great.
And, I'm sorry that I didn't know much about you until now.
I red that you like writing, dancing, singing, and even acting. Because I am not a kind of art person, I was surprised. I may see you differently. Of course, in a good way. I always envy people who sing or draw well.
Frankly speaking, I want to know more about you, but, I am not familiar with asking questions in English.
However, I am thinking I need to practice asking, because if I have something to ask while studying in the US, I have to ask somebody to help me.
So, we can have one day that I may interview you properly. It might help me know you and somebody who might be my friend. Through this experience, I will know what to ask and how to ask personal questions.
Oh, and, I am sorry that I might not have our class tomorrow. I forgot I have an appointment with my friends. ^^. Take care until Monday, Alice!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Summer!^^
Aaaawh... I appreciate your time reading through my profile. (Oh my geez)
I feel so embarrassed about my video. I want to say it wasn\'t me! Haha.
Anyway, I think that\'s a very good idea, Summer.
It\'s okay for you to ask me about things sometimes. It\'s really up to you, my dear.
It will not only mold our relationsdhip as friends, but also, it will help you improve your questioning and comprehension.
I will miss you, Summer!^^
See you on Monday!
~Teacher Alice
Hello Alice, ^^>> Correct!While wondering this website, I just saw your profile and your video. ^^
>> While wandering this website, I just saw your profile and your video.^^
It\'s great.
>> Correct!And, I\'m sorry that I didn\'t know much about you until now.
>> Correct!I red that you like writing, dancing, singing, and even acting.
>> I read that you like writng, dancing, singing, and even acting.
Because I am not a kind of art person, I was surprised.
>> That\'s because I am not an artistic person, I was surprised.
I may see you differently.
>> Correct!
Of course, in a good way.
>> Correct!
I always envy people who sing or draw well. >> Correct!Frankly speaking, I want to know more about you, but, I am not familiar with asking questions in English.
>> Correct! However, I am thinking I need to practice asking, because if I have something to ask while studying in the US, I have to ask somebody to help me.
>> Correct!So, we can have one day that I may interview you properly.
>> Correct!
It might help me know you and somebody who might be my friend.
>> Correct!
Through this experience, I will know what to ask and how to ask personal questions. >> Correct!Oh, and, I am sorry that I might not have our class tomorrow.
>> Correct!
I forgot I have an appointment with my friends. ^^.
>> Correct!
Take care until Monday, Alice!!
>> Correct!
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