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2013-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello Anne, First of all, it was very mice to see you. Even though we don't have many classes, we can get to know each other and you can help me to complete the interview successfully as well. I am a registered nurse here in Korea. And, because I want to study further, I quit the job and I applied several graduate schools in the States. For now, I am waiting for admission from any of the school I applied. I have already finished two interviews including Duke Univ. and University of Michigan. Thanks to the teacher Alice, I could complete them well. The University of Illinois has provided an opportunity for the interview, and it might be done next wednesday or thursday night. So, until then, we can have mock interviews. ^^ Here's the sample questions you can ask me.

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Thank you so much Summer for letting me know about the questions.^^ I also find you amazing by the way you talk and the way you deliver your sentences. I can say that you are a great person.^^ See you soon. - T. Anne   Hello Anne,>> CORRECT!First of all, it was very mice to see you. >> CORRECT! Even though we don\'t have many classes, we can get to know each other and you can help me to complete the interview successfully as well.>> CORRECT!I am a registered nurse here in Korea. >> CORRECT! And, because I want to study further, I quit the job and I applied several graduate schools in the States. >> And, because I want to study further, I quit the job and I applied for several graduate schools in the States. For now, I am waiting for admission from any of the school I applied. >> For now, I am waiting for the admission from any of the schools that I applied for.I have already finished two interviews including Duke Univ. and University of Michigan. >> CORRECT! Thanks to the teacher Alice, I could complete them well. >> CORRECT!The University of Illinois has provided an opportunity for the interview, and it might be done next wednesday or thursday night. >> CORRECT! So, until then, we can have mock interviews. ^^>> CORRECT!Here\'s the sample questions you can ask me. >> CORRECT!

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