HELLO

Hello.Nice to meet you. My name is [이름].But you can call me Tom.I'm twelve years old.I live in Jeju.I like science,art,music......One of them,I like science(biology). I breed salt water fishes(like Nemo).You are new teacher.So I'm nervous.I want to have a fun class.Thank you.^^

Hi TOM^^ I\'m glad to hear from you. Nice to meet you too.Wow!You like biology,me too!Don\'t be nervous. I will be doing my best to make our class fun. Thank you for telling me things about you. I appreciate your effort for sending me a composition today. Good job!You were able to express yourself well.^^ Your sentences were great!Keep it up!See you later in class.Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Hello. >> Correct! Nice to meet you. >>Correct!My name is [이름]. >> Correct! But you can call me Tom. >> Correct! OR >> My English name is Tom. I\'m twelve years old. >> Correct! OR >> I\'m twelve years of age. I live in Jeju. >> Correct! I like science,art,music......One of them,I like science(biology). >> I like science,art and music. One of them that I really like is Biology which is a branch in Science. I breed salt water fishes(like Nemo). >> Correct! OR >> I take good care of salt water fishes like Nemo. You are new teacher. >> You are my new teacher. So I\'m nervous. >> Correct! I want to have a fun class. >> Correct! Thank you.^^ >> Correct!