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Hello Anne, I am having really hectic days recently. So, I don't have enough time to complete my homework or write something down in this space. I'm kind of sad about it. TT Anyway, I need to send an email to a graduate school in the States, Duke University. I have some sentences that need to be corrected. So, I want you to fix awkward expressions in my sentences. Thank you in advance. ^^ Below is what I have to include in the email. ----- Since you have sent me an email that my application put on the wait-list, I am wondering that how many people on that list and how many people in front of my turn. If you can answer my question, I will be very thankful. And, there is one more thing you can check for me. I have ordered ETS to report my TOEFL score at Nov. 19, 2012. And, ETS shows that they completed reporting my score to your school at Nov. 22, 2012. If you have nothing received from ETS, please let me know. I, also, attach the recipient of the order.

Happy White day Summer! I hope that you\'re feeling good today. I had given my corrections on your letter and I hope that you find them useful. See you soon.^^ -- T. Anne   Hello Anne,>> CORRECT!I am having really hectic days recently. >>  I am really having a hectic schedule these days.  So, I don\'t have enough time to complete my homework or write something down in this space. >> CORRECT! I\'m kind of sad about it. TT>> CORRECT!Anyway, I need to send an email to a graduate school in the States, Duke University. >> CORRECT! I have some sentences that need to be corrected. >> CORRECT! So, I want you to fix awkward expressions in my sentences. >> So, I want you to fix Thank you in advance. ^^>> CORRECT!Below is what I have to include in the email.>> CORRECT!-----Since you have sent me an email that my application put on the wait-list, I am wondering that how many people on that list and how many people in front of my turn. >> Since you have sent me an email that my application was placed on the wait-list, I am wondering about how many people are on that list and how many people are in line before me. If you can answer my question, I will be very thankful. >> CORRECT!And, there is one more thing you can check for me. >> CORRECT! I have ordered ETS to report my TOEFL score at Nov. 19, 2012. >> CORRECT! And, ETS shows that they completed reporting my score to your school at Nov. 22, 2012. If you have nothing received from ETS, please let me know. I, also, attach the recipient of the order. >> And upon reviewing, ETS shows that they completed reporting my score to your school at Nov. 22, 2012. If you have not received anything from ETS, please let me know. I also, attached the recipient of the order.Thank you!