Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Good morning too, dear.^^
It\'s very nice to hear that you had a good sleep and some exercises.
Try to have more so that you will be well.
Don\'t be confused with your sentences.
You just need to practice more on this kind of homework.
Don\'t worry, I will be helping you with it so that you will not get mixed up.
See you soon, too.^^
T. Chloe^^
Good morning!
>> Correct
How are you?
>> Correct
I slept very well and I did exercise in this morning.
>> I slept very well and I did some exercises this morning.
The weather is getting better so my condition is very good.
>> Correct
OR >> The weather is getting better that is why I am feeling good.
I try to use 80%~90% my energy for my balance.
>> I try to use about 80 to 90% of my energy to balance things out.
Anyway we have to cheer up! Tomorrow is friday.
>> Correct [Friday]
This is our homework.
>> Correct
1. Parker is the boy who we all voted for him.
>> Parker is the boy whom we all voted for.
2. The man is a plumber who came to our house just now.
>> The man who came to our house just now is a plumber.
3. The guests did nor come that we invited them onlt this morning.
>> The guests who we invited only this morning did not come.
4. The birid is a wood pigeon which you saw the bird on the steps just now.
>> The bird which you saw the bird on the steps just now is a wood pigeon.
5. I told him abot the storm that this storm destroyes several houses last week.
>> I told him about the storm which destroyed several houses last week.
I am little confused to make sentences.
>> I am a little confused with how I should construct my sentences.
Thank you so much and have a nice day.
>> Correct
See you soon!!
>> Correct
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