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2013-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Hi!! Happy monday. I have a great news. My niece is bornd in this morning. I am worried about my older sister and I am wondering my niece. How could she pretty. When I finish my work I will go to hospital. It takes one and half hour from my work by subway but I have to go. My senior coworker allow that I can leave at work 30mintes ealry. I am excited to see my niec. She will be pretty and small. I can't wait at night. Anyway Weather is really old today. How is your places? Take care ! See you soon!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
I have to thank you for sending this in because you know very well how I love going over your works.

Congratulations! Now your skills in being a good aunt will be put to test.

I bet your niece looks pretty.^^
I will see you then in our next class.
Take care!

Hi!! Happy monday.

>>Correct!
I have a great news.

>>Correct!
My niece is bornd in this morning.

>>My niece was delivered this morning.

>>My niece was born this morning.
I am worried about my older sister and I am wondering my niece.

>>I am worried about my elder sister and I am wondering about my niece.
How could she pretty. When I finish my work I will go to hospital.

>>How pretty is she? When I finish my work, I will go to the hospital.^^
It takes one and half hour from my work by subway but I have to go.

>>It takes one and a half hour by subway from my workplace to the hospital but I have to go there.
My senior coworker allow that I can leave at work 30mintes ealry.

>>My senior co-worker allowed me to leave 30 minutes earlier than the end of my shift.
I am excited to see my niec.

>>I am excited to see my niece.

She will be pretty and small.

>>Correct

OR >> She must be pretty and small.
I can\'t wait at night.

>>I can\'t wait for the night to come.
Anyway Weather is really old today.

>>Anyway, it is really cold here.

>>Anyway, the weather is bad today.

How is your places?

>>How is it in your place?
Take care ! See you soon!!

>>Correct!

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