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Hi there!
I have to thank you for sending this in because you know very well how I love going over your works.
Congratulations! Now your skills in being a good aunt will be put to test.
I bet your niece looks pretty.^^
I will see you then in our next class.
Take care!
Hi!! Happy monday.
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I have a great news.
>>Correct!
My niece is bornd in this morning.
>>My niece was delivered this morning.
>>My niece was born this morning.
I am worried about my older sister and I am wondering my niece.
>>I am worried about my elder sister and I am wondering about my niece.
How could she pretty. When I finish my work I will go to hospital.
>>How pretty is she? When I finish my work, I will go to the hospital.^^
It takes one and half hour from my work by subway but I have to go.
>>It takes one and a half hour by subway from my workplace to the hospital but I have to go there.
My senior coworker allow that I can leave at work 30mintes ealry.
>>My senior co-worker allowed me to leave 30 minutes earlier than the end of my shift.
I am excited to see my niec.
>>I am excited to see my niece.
She will be pretty and small.
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OR >> She must be pretty and small.
I can\'t wait at night.
>>I can\'t wait for the night to come.
Anyway Weather is really old today.
>>Anyway, it is really cold here.
>>Anyway, the weather is bad today.
How is your places?
>>How is it in your place?
Take care ! See you soon!!
>>Correct!
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