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2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Hi! Chloe!! Happy Monday. I have spent a very busy day this morning. I couldn't rest well last weekend. Last friday I went to the company workshop until saturday. I wanted to take a rest alot but I had to summit twe report at university. I did it during rest of my weekend. Anyway! Today is last week of the month!! Take care and have a great day!! Thank You!

강사 첨삭

Hello there! 

You really had a busy weekend.

I\'m amazed at how you managed your time to finish your reports.

Good job!

Anyway, kindly go over some minor corrections that I made.

Have a great day!

-Teacher Chloe-

Hi! Chloe!!

>> Correct.

Happy Monday.

>> Correct.

I have spent a very busy day this morning.

>> I had a very busy day this morning.

I couldn\'t rest well last weekend.

>> Correct.

Last friday I went to the company workshop until saturday.

>>  Last Friday I went to the company workshop and it ended last Saturday.

I wanted to take a rest alot but I had to summit twe report at university.

>> I wanted to take a rest but I had to submit two reports in the university.

I did it during rest of my weekend.

>> I did it during the rest of my weekend.

Anyway! Today is last week of the month!!

>> Correct.

Take care and have a great day!!

>> Correct.

Thank You!

>> Correct.

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