hello
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!!
A pleasant afternoon to you~~
Start focusing and learning as much as possible while you still have time
because it would be so difficult to catch up once you have a lot of things to do.
Believe in yourself and do something about your skills and eventually you\'ll be great as what you\'ve said. :)
Have a nice day! See you~~
T.Chloe
Hello.
>> Hello!
Thank you for your theching to me.
>> Thank You for teaching me.
I want to talk fluently so I became saying fast and made a fales.
>> I want to speak fluently so I say something fast and commit a lot of mistakes.
I will remember your tips.
>> CORRECT!!
Actually, I heard alot of English and tried to say in English during my workshop.
>> Actually, I heard a lot of English expressions and tried to say something in English during our workshop.
Because I want to answer correctly to my boss.
>> Because I want to answer my boss correctly.
And nowaday, I have a chance to say in English at work.
>> And nowadays, I have the chance to say something in English at work.
>> And nowadays, I have to speak in English at work.
I think that circumstances is important.
>> I think that circumstance is important.
and I also enrolled university in majar English so I have to join 6class every week.
>> I also enrolled in the university taking up English so I have to join the class 6 times a week.
>> I also enrolled in the university taking up English so I have to attend my classes 6 times a week.
Eventhough I didn\'t study very well I just listen to class but It can help to improve my skiils.
>> Even though I didn\'t study very well I listened to the class and it helps to improve my skills.
When I will graduated at universty I will be great.
>> When I graduate from the university, I will be great.
Have a great day and see you soon
>> CORRECT!!
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