Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
I am very busy day.
I almost couldn't write it.
I bought a new telephone that's Note two.
I am excited to give it.
After working I am going to pick up my phone because It coudn't use it during the weekend.
I am not hightech but it is usefull for me.
Have a nice dinner and see you soon!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Good evening! Wow, I am very happy for you. You must be excited now to pick up your new smartphone. Enjoy using it! Have a good night Ma\'am. You too, have an enjoyable dinner.
-Teacher Chloe
Hi.
>>Correct! I am very busy day.
>>I am very busy today.
>>I have a very busy day. I almost couldn\'t write it.
>>I almost couldn\'t write. I bought a new telephone that\'s Note two.
>>I bought a new smartphone, Samsung Galaxy Note 2. I am excited to give it.
>>I am excited to receive it.
>>I am excited to use it. After working I am going to pick up my phone because It coudn\'t use it during the weekend.>>After work, I am going to pick up my new phone because I couldn\'t during the weekend.
I am not hightech but it is usefull for me.
>>I am not a techie person but it is useful to me.
>>I am not a techy person but it is useful to me.
Have a nice dinner and see you soon!!
>>Correct!
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