Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
I read your message for me. ^_____^
You have fun then and take care please. ^^
I have some corrections for you though.
If you have time,kindly check them.
Bye now! ^^
Hello
>>CORRECT
OR>>Hello there!
Happy Wednesday.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>Happy Wednesday to you!
Today is in the middle of the week and tomorrow is holiday.
>>CORRECT!
Do we have a class tomorrow?
>>CORRECT!
Because tomorrow is Korea national holiday.
>>Because tomorrow is a national Korean holiday.
I don\'t need to work so I am planning to go to the mountain with boyfriend and his friends.
>>I don\'t need to go to work so I am planning to go to the mountains with my boyfriend and his friends.
We will be funny!
>>We will have fun.
Anyway I am so tired because I didn\'t sleep very well.
>>CORRECT!
I slept onlt 3 or 4 hours.
>>I slept for only 3 or 4 hours.
My body was really burnt out but mental was not.
>>My body is really weak but mentally, I\'m fine.
See you soon!!
>>CORRECT!
Have a nice day!!
>>CORRECT!
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