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2013-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Happy Wednesday. Today is in the middle of the week and tomorrow is holiday. Do we have a class tomorrow? Because tomorrow is Korea national holiday. I don't need to work so I am planning to go to the mountain with boyfriend and his friends. We will be funny! Anyway I am so tired because I didn't sleep very well. I slept onlt 3 or 4 hours. My body was really burnt out but mental was not. See you soon!! Have a nice day!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

I read your message for me. ^_____^

You have fun then and take care please. ^^

I have some corrections for you though.

If you have time,kindly check them.

Bye now! ^^

Hello

>>CORRECT

OR>>Hello there!
Happy Wednesday.

>>CORRECT!

OR>>Happy Wednesday to you!

Today is in the middle of the week and tomorrow is holiday.

>>CORRECT!
Do we have a class tomorrow?

>>CORRECT!
Because tomorrow is Korea national holiday.

>>Because tomorrow is a national Korean holiday.
I don\'t need to work so I am planning to go to the mountain with boyfriend and his friends.

>>I don\'t need to go to work so I am planning to go to the mountains with my boyfriend and his friends.
We will be funny!

>>We will have fun.
Anyway I am so tired because I didn\'t sleep very well.

>>CORRECT!
I slept onlt 3 or 4 hours.

>>I slept for only 3 or 4 hours.
My body was really burnt out but mental was not.
>>My body is really weak but mentally, I\'m fine.
See you soon!!

>>CORRECT!

Have a nice day!!

>>CORRECT!

 

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