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Good evening ,my lovely intimate teacher Liza:) I will believe that what I give to the world, the world will give to me. This sentence seems to think ourselves as very distincitve , valuable and priceless characters. And realizing I am the only person who I was meant to be in the world. But the most important part is emphasizing the importance and significance about volunteering people in the world who are depressed. It is undisputable to help other people and stand together next to them when they are excruciated and painful ,and at the end of the day they will be blessed by world someday.

Good evening too to my smartest and kindest student^^,   Have you eaten your dinner? I hope you did. Me, I just had my dinner^^. Anyways, another good composition you had here. Congratulations and keep it up. I agree with you in this essay you sent today. Doing good deeds to other people could give you unexplainable happiness. I do hope that many people would countinue to do volunteer works and will do volunteer works in the future. I believe that helping others without asking any thing in return would receive blessing and rewards someday. Let\'s talk about the content of your essay. I can still see a lot of grammar errors. Have time to check them and study the correct usage of noun vs. adjective. Okay^^ Thanks again for today and see you tomorrow! Have a blessed night my dear. Teacher Liza     Good evening ,my lovely intimate teacher Liza:) >> OR: Good evening to my lovely and intimate teacher Liza. >> Puctuation mark check: Good evening my lovely and intimate teacher Liza. I will believe that what I give to the world, the world will give to me.This sentence seems to think ourselves as very distincitve , valuable and priceless characters. >>Correct >> OR: This sentence seems to tell us our distinct, valuable and priceless characters as human beings. And realizing I am the only person who I was meant to be in the world. >>And realizing that I am the only person who\'s meant to live in this world. But the most important part is emphasizing the importance and significance about volunteering people in the world who are depressed. >>But the most important thing is emphasizing the importance of volunteering to other people who needs our help. >> OR: But what matter most is that we should be concentrating with doing volunteer works for other people.  It is undisputable to help other people and stand together next to them when they are excruciated and painful ,and at the end of the day they will be blessed by world someday. >>It is undisputable to help other people and to stand together next them when they are excruciated and in pain. At the end of the day, we will be blessed by the world someday.