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1.pretty
2.clean
3.expensive
4.funny
5.thin
I had a' friendship camp'.And I came to my home today.
But,something was strange.
Because,I didn't slept with my family.
so I felt that all the families are important.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dearest TOM^^
Happy Thursday! Long time no see! Wow! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a pretty nice job. How was the homework? Is it difficult? Don\'t worry we are going to talk about this later in class. Yes, you are right! Family is really important. I know that you missed them. Can\'t wait to talk to you. Tell me about your camping in class. Take care! See you!
Teacher nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.pretty
>> Correct! OR beautiful 2.clean
>> shinny 3.expensive
>> plain 4.funny
>> mean 5.thin>> narrow I had a\' friendship camp\'.And I came to my home today.
>> I had a \"Friendship Camp\" yesterday and I just came home today.
OR >> I had a \"Friendship Camp\" yesterday and I just arrived home today.But,something was strange.
>> Correct!
OR >> But there was something strange.Because,I didn\'t slept with my family.so I felt that all the families are important.
>> Because I didn\'t sleep with my family. I felt that they are important.
OR >> I didn\'t sleep at home, I felt the importance of my family.
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