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2013-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.pretty 2.clean 3.expensive 4.funny 5.thin I had a' friendship camp'.And I came to my home today. But,something was strange. Because,I didn't slept with my family. so I felt that all the families are important.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dearest TOM^^ Happy Thursday! Long time no see! Wow! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a pretty nice job. How was the homework? Is it difficult? Don\'t worry we are going to talk about this later in class. Yes, you are right! Family is really important. I know that you missed them. Can\'t wait to talk to you. Tell me about your camping in class. Take care! See you! Teacher nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.pretty >> Correct! OR beautiful 2.clean >> shinny 3.expensive >> plain 4.funny >> mean 5.thin>> narrow I had a\' friendship camp\'.And I came to my home today. >> I had a \"Friendship Camp\" yesterday and I just came home today. OR >> I had a \"Friendship Camp\" yesterday and I just arrived home today.But,something was strange. >> Correct! OR >> But there was something strange.Because,I didn\'t slept with my family.so I felt that all the families are important. >> Because I didn\'t sleep with my family. I felt that they are important. OR >> I didn\'t sleep at home, I felt the importance of my family.

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