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Hi! Good morning! I am feeling good. I try to control myself and to be smart. I scolded younger sister about her rude behavior. I think it was great choice. She is not teenager anymore but she is being selfish. I don't understand it. Anyway, nowadays I talked to alot 10minutes is very short. Today, I will reduce my part I want to listen your feedback. have a nice day! Chloe! See you tonight!

Hi!

Thank you for sending in your homework!

Being able to control one\'s self is a good thing. Not all people can do that, so that is good for you.^^

I hope your sister is still OK after you scolded her. ^^ Besides, no matter how old a person is, he or she should not be selfish.

You talking a lot is a sign that you are able to express yourself well. I will do my best to correct you during class, but if we run out of time, I will just leave sufficient comments so that you will know what my feedback is. So I would really like you to keep up talking a lot. ^^

Please check on the corrections I made below.

Take care of yourself and have a great Thursday!

~Teacher Chloe~

Hi! Good morning!

>>Correct!
I am feeling good.

>>Correct!
I try to control myself and to be smart.

>>I try to control myself and be smart.
I scolded younger sister about her rude behavior.

>>I scolded my younger sister about her rude behavior.
I think it was great choice.

>>Correct!

She is not teenager anymore but she is being selfish.

>>She is not a teenager anymore but she is being selfish.
I don\'t understand it.

>>Correct!
Anyway, nowadays I talked to alot 10minutes is very short.

>>Anyway, nowadays I talk a lot so 10 minutes is very short.

or

>>I talk a lot these days that is why 10 minutes is not enough.
Today, I will reduce my part I want to listen your feedback.
>>Today, I will reduce my part because I want to listen your feedback.
have a nice day! Chloe!

>>Have a nice day, Chloe!
See you tonight!

>>Correct!