Hello

2013-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello!! Happy Monday! How was your weekend? I spent at home all weekend. I read a book and did excercise. I also talked alot with my father. we are more close. I listend his childhood that time I saw tears at his eyes. I felt my proud that he is my father. Today is new month start!! Have a great day! and take care !!

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday to you too! ^^ It is great to hear that you had a good time during the weekends. I also feel happy that you proud of your father. :) Let us start the month right! Let us be happy! ^^ Have a great month ahead and you take care as well! ~Teacher Chloe~ Hello!! Happy Monday! >>Correct!How was your weekend? >>Correct!I spent at home all weekend. >>I spent the weekends at home. or >>I stayed home all weekend.I read a book and did excercise. >>I read a book and exercised.I also talked alot with my father. >>I also talked a to my father. we are more close. >>We are closer.I listend his childhood that time I saw tears at his eyes. >>I listened to him talk about his childhood and at that time, I saw tears in his eyes.I felt my proud that he is my father.>>Correct!Today is new month start!! >>Today is the start of a new month! Have a great day! and take care !! >>Have a great day, and take care!  

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·