Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello!! Happy Monday!
How was your weekend?
I spent at home all weekend.
I read a book and did excercise.
I also talked alot with my father. we are more close.
I listend his childhood that time I saw tears at his eyes.
I felt my proud that he is my father.
Today is new month start!!
Have a great day! and take care !!
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday to you too! ^^
It is great to hear that you had a good time during the weekends. I also feel happy that you proud of your father. :)
Let us start the month right! Let us be happy! ^^
Have a great month ahead and you take care as well!
~Teacher Chloe~
Hello!! Happy Monday!
>>Correct!How was your weekend?
>>Correct!I spent at home all weekend.
>>I spent the weekends at home.
or
>>I stayed home all weekend.I read a book and did excercise.
>>I read a book and exercised.I also talked alot with my father.
>>I also talked a to my father.
we are more close.
>>We are closer.I listend his childhood that time I saw tears at his eyes.
>>I listened to him talk about his childhood and at that time, I saw tears in his eyes.I felt my proud that he is my father.>>Correct!Today is new month start!!
>>Today is the start of a new month!
Have a great day! and take care !!
>>Have a great day, and take care!
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