Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
today is write about you!!!
do you have broter or sister?
how old are you?
do you like me? (i like you!!!♥_♥)Ha-Ha-
where graduation school?
......but i don't have other question......@-@
then.. just you writing this question!!!!
see you tomorrow~~~♥
강사 첨삭
Hello again [이름]!
Thank you for sending these questions.
Okay, here are my answers: ^^
I have one younger sister. I don\'t have a brother.
I like you, too!!
I think I have to tell you the other answers in class tomorrow.
Please review the corrections below.~
Good night [이름]!!
~ T. Giselle ^_^
today is write about you!!!
>> Today I am writing questions for you!!do you have broter or sister?
>> Do you have a brother or a sister?how old are you?
>> Correct!do you like me?
>> Correct!
(i like you!!!♥_♥)Ha-Ha-
>> Correct!where graduation school?
>> Which school did you graduate from?......but i don\'t have other question......@-@>> I don\'t hav other questions anymore... @-@
then.. just you writing this question!!!!
>> Then, I only have these questions!!!see you tomorrow~~~♥
>> Correct!
>>OR: See you tomorrow~
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