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2013-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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today is write about you!!! do you have broter or sister? how old are you? do you like me? (i like you!!!♥_♥)Ha-Ha- where graduation school? ......but i don't have other question......@-@ then.. just you writing this question!!!! see you tomorrow~~~♥

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Hello again [이름]! Thank you for sending these questions. Okay, here are my answers: ^^ I have one younger sister. I don\'t have a brother. I like you, too!! I think I have to tell you the other answers in class tomorrow. Please review the corrections below.~ Good night [이름]!! ~ T. Giselle ^_^   today is write about you!!! >> Today I am writing questions for you!!do you have broter or sister? >>  Do you have a brother or a sister?how old are you? >>  Correct!do you like me? >>  Correct! (i like you!!!♥_♥)Ha-Ha- >>  Correct!where graduation school? >>  Which school did you graduate from?......but i don\'t have other question......@-@>>  I don\'t hav other questions anymore... @-@ then.. just you writing this question!!!! >> Then, I only have these questions!!!see you tomorrow~~~♥ >> Correct! >>OR: See you tomorrow~

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